A Journal of Poetry / Windows Live Survivor

Girl Rae



Girl Rae

my guide visits me

can sense her calling my name

a voice that calms me

chills me to my bones


my favourite star

turned my darkness into light

love from afar

given me every star in the sky


you’d lost your battle

a sad heavy heart

left our material world

you’re my shining star


given me guidance

taught me kindness is the key

made my universe a better place

your eternal grace

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11 responses

  1. Candy

    Hi Jewelie, I love the way your name is spelled.Thank you so much for your kind words.It will be a very different Christmas this year but I keep a smile on my face for my mom.My uncle Mike says I should change my profile picture but I dont want to really change anything.When I’m sad I read my sisters words on her space and they make me feel better.She had alot of love to give and I hope I can be as good a person as she was.Happy holidays and hugsAmilia

    December 15, 2009 at 7:19 pm

  2. T

    We would all want to have a girl Rae I think. ;-)Lovely tribute!Hug,T

    December 11, 2009 at 5:41 pm

  3. E

    Another beautiful poem,it’s really touching… you’re really talented..u space still looks great in red…wishing u a great weekend xx

    December 11, 2009 at 1:22 pm

  4. jACQUIE

    This is magic Jewelie…may she continue to be your shining star always!

    December 10, 2009 at 12:53 am

  5. Linette

    Very beautiful Jewelie, very beautiful and touching as well hun. Love it!

    December 8, 2009 at 5:49 pm

  6. Sparkles

    That’s a beautiful poem Jewelie.. you have a beautiful mind and heart…Have a magical day…Jen. xxx

    December 8, 2009 at 1:35 pm

  7. Dreamwalker

    Wonderful Jewelie, and its good to know and feel our guides, May she ever be at your side guiding you, and May she take you to the Stars of Life, protected in her wings of love for you.. Blessings x

    December 8, 2009 at 10:39 am

  8. Angel eyes

    a beautiful tribute angel eyes

    December 8, 2009 at 10:30 am

  9. Sue

    This is beautiful, you have a way with words, that touchs peopleTake careSue

    December 8, 2009 at 5:03 am

  10. Heart..Renaissance Man

    this shines ..

    December 8, 2009 at 4:28 am

  11. Beth

    A very beautiful tribute for your friend. I am very sorry for your loss.Hugs,Beth

    December 8, 2009 at 3:31 am

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